Subject	NZR- HELP!! can you advise if this is right? >>
Posted by	maverick (NYC) on October 03, 2001 at 10:54 AM
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Message	need your help. sending out a dozen cover letters today. is this grammatically correct? >> My experiences include working for some of the most well respected, key players in the technology-focused industries. ==> 'some of the most well respected': this sounds correct but something is telling me its out of agreement. ==> 'technology-focused': does it make sense to word it this way? i know its kinda wierd posting this on a z forum but any help would be appreciated. thanks in advance. mike zxredline@yahoo.com 1990 PearlGold Stage3 NA
Follow Ups	NZR- HELP!! can you advise if this is right? >> - maverick (NYC) 10:54:11 10/03/01 "the" does not go with "industries" .. plural vs. singular (n/m) - Elguapo (Dallas) 11:00:38 10/03/01 Here's another way to say it> - Lady300Z 11:01:37 10/03/01 hey ladyz . wheres wagz been. u got him tied up (n/m) - xaviar 11:20:50 10/03/01 also, get rid of well .. most respected is better (n/m) - Elguapo (Dallas) 11:01:42 10/03/01 Be more specific in a cover letter, using the cover letter - JeffZTT (Lurker) 11:15:31 10/03/01 THANKS guys (and gal =) I made a few changes >> - maverick (NYC) 11:21:01 10/03/01 Don't use the two discriptives, well and most. Redundant. (n/m) - DougG 13:34:03 10/03/01
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